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I am ill and staying in bed. I feel awful and bored. What can I do to make myself feel cheerful

I am ill and staying in bed. I feel awful and bored. What can I do to make myself feel cheerful m8LB8
Dear Thai It was great to hear from you. I hope all is well. Today, I’m writing this letter to respond to you. Firstly, have you felt better yet? I hope you will be fine soon. Sometimes, I’m also sick, so I really know your feeling. It does not only make you tired but also bored while only staying in bed. Nevertheless, everything will be fine in the next couple of days. Secondly, I’ll suggest some things you play at this time. Watching television is also a way to kill time, I recommend some channels that you should see that VTV4 news, Khanh Vy channel. Those not only provide your knowledge but also improve English skills. Other activities as listening to music, confiding with someone are also useful to work you should take to keep your mind comfortable. The most important thing does not do any heavy activities so that ill will pass soon. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. I hope you’ll be ok as soon as. Best wishes,
Dear Thai

It was great to hear from you. I hope all is well.
Today
, I’m writing this letter to respond to you.

Firstly
, have you felt better
yet
? I hope you will be fine
soon
.
Sometimes
, I’m
also
sick,
so
I
really
know your feeling. It does not
only
make
you tired
but
also
bored while
only
staying in bed.
Nevertheless
, everything will be fine in the
next
couple of days.

Secondly
, I’ll suggest
some
things you play at this time. Watching television is
also
a way to kill time, I recommend
some
channels that you should
see
that VTV4 news,
Khanh
Vy
channel. Those not
only
provide your knowledge
but
also
improve
English
skills
. Other activities as listening to music, confiding with someone
are
also
useful to work you should take to
keep
your mind comfortable. The most
important
thing does not do any heavy activities
so
that ill will pass
soon
.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you. I hope you’ll be ok as
soon
as.

Best wishes,
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IELTS letter I am ill and staying in bed. I feel awful and bored. What can I do to make myself feel cheerful

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5 paragraphs
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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