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I am ill and staying in bed. I feel awful and bored. What can I do to make myself feel cheerful

I am ill and staying in bed. I feel awful and bored. What can I do to make myself feel cheerful m8LB8
Dear Thai It was great to hear from you. I hope all is well. Today, I’m writing this letter to respond to you. Firstly, have you felt better yet? I hope you will be fine soon. Sometimes, I’m also sick, so I really know your feeling. It does not only make you tired but also bored while only staying in bed. Nevertheless, everything will be fine in the next couple of days. Secondly, I’ll suggest some things you play at this time. Watching television is also a way to kill time, I recommend some channels that you should see that VTV4 news, Khanh Vy channel. Those not only provide your knowledge but also improve English skills. Other activities as listening to music, confiding with someone are also useful to work you should take to keep your mind comfortable. The most important thing does not do any heavy activities so that ill will pass soon. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. I hope you’ll be ok as soon as. Best wishes,
Dear Thai

It was great to hear from you. I hope all is well.
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Today
, I’m writing this letter to respond to you.

Firstly
, have you felt better
yet
? I hope you will be fine
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soon
.
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Sometimes
, I’m
also
sick,
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so
I
really
know your feeling. It does not
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only
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make
you tired
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but
also
bored while
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only
staying in bed.
Nevertheless
, everything will be fine in the
next
couple of days.

Secondly
, I’ll suggest
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some
things you play at this time. Watching television is
also
a way to kill time, I recommend
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some
channels that you should
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see
that VTV4 news,
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Khanh
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Vy
channel. Those not
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only
provide your knowledge
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but
also
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improve
English
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skills
. Other activities as listening to music, confiding with someone
The pronoun 'someone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "is", "was", "were".
are
also
useful to work you should take to
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keep
your mind comfortable. The most
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important
thing does not do any heavy activities
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so
that ill will pass
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soon
.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you. I hope you’ll be ok as
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soon
as.

Best wishes,

IELTS letter I am ill and staying in bed. I feel awful and bored. What can I do to make myself feel cheerful

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171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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