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You discover that some people in your neighborhood have made unnecessary gatherings while others do not wear masks at public places, which can cause virus infection and spread. Write a letter to the Chairperson of City People’s Committee, complaining about these worrying acts and behavior. In your letter, you should: - Say who you are and why you write the letter - Describe what you have seen and clarify why they are really worrying - Suggest some measures to deal with these wrong doings

You discover that some people in your neighborhood have made unnecessary gatherings while others do not wear masks at public places, which can cause virus infection and spread. Write a letter to the Chairperson of City People’s Committee, complaining about these worrying acts and behavior. In your letter, you should: - Say who you are and why you write the letter - Describe what you have seen and clarify why they are really worrying - Suggest some measures to deal with these wrong doings 0aMVq
Dear Sir/Madam, I am a city dweller who lives at No 8, Tran Dai Nghia street, Tam Binh district, Vinh Long province. I am writing to draw your attention about violations of epidemic prevention and control Covid-19 in my neighborhood. First, I see there are unnecessary gatherings in public places with large amount. People have small talk together but very long, do exercise in large groups, especially someone drink alcohol and beer in the park. Moreover, they do not wear masks and keep the minimium distance 2m. It’s one of the violation of public behavior. Covid-19 pandemic and its danger is horrible. In the world, the infection of this deadly virus is spreading at the higher and higher speed. So if we don’t obey the rules, we will have the high risk of infect it and it’s very awful. I strongly demand that we must increase the work of propagation and education for improving people’s awareness of the pandemic danger. Using radio announcement, panels, affiches, banderoles or social networks is a good idea. Beside that, we must apply dear administrative fines and organize frequent patrol and inspection trips. And for people who don’t have masks, we should disseminate masks to them. I am enclosing with this letter some videos that I recorded them and their behavior yesterday. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a city dweller who
lives
at No 8, Tran
Dai
Nghia
street, Tam
Binh
district,
Vinh
Long province. I am writing to draw your attention about violations of epidemic prevention and control Covid-19 in my neighborhood.

First
, I
see
there are unnecessary gatherings in public places with large amount.
People
have
small
talk together
but
very
long, do exercise in large groups,
especially
someone
drink
alcohol and beer in the park.
Moreover
, they do not wear masks and
keep
the
minimium
distance
2m
. It’s one of the violation of public behavior. Covid-19 pandemic and its
danger
is horrible. In the world, the infection of this deadly virus is spreading at the higher and higher speed.
So
if we don’t obey the
rules
, we will have the high
risk
of infect it and it’s
very
awful.

I
strongly
demand that we
must
increase the work of propagation and education for improving
people
’s awareness of the pandemic
danger
. Using radio announcement, panels,
affiches
,
banderoles
or social networks is a
good
idea
. Beside that, we
must
apply dear administrative fines and organize frequent patrol and inspection trips. And for
people
who don’t have masks, we should disseminate masks to them.

I am enclosing with this letter
some
videos that I recorded them and their behavior yesterday.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You discover that some people in your neighborhood have made unnecessary gatherings while others do not wear masks at public places, which can cause virus infection and spread. Write a letter to the Chairperson of City People’s Committee, complaining about these worrying acts and behavior. In your letter, you should: - Say who you are and why you write the letter - Describe what you have seen and clarify why they are really worrying - Suggest some measures to deal with these wrong doings

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