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You have been looking after your friend’s house while they were on holiday. However, you have forgotten to do something that they asked you to do before they left. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Apologise to your friend Explain how you forgot to do what they asked Offer something to make up for the mistake

You have been looking after your friend’s house while they were on holiday. However, you have forgotten to do something that they asked you to do before they left. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Apologise to your friend Explain how you forgot to do what they asked Offer something to make up for the mistake eb5oO
Dear Nam How are you and the family going? I hope you enjoyed your holiday and we could drink coffee together after your return journey. I’m afraid that I’m writing this letter to make an apology to you You know that I said that I could look after your house last week when you had a trip with your family? I'm really sorry but I’ve just noticed that I forgot to fix your bike. I haven’t got a clue how it happened I feel terrible as I know your bike’s chain and petals were broken. I tried to fix it but, unfortunately, your house didn’t have full equipment. I probably should have remind to bring my bicycle toolbox to your house Of course, I’m going to either bring my box to fix your bike only. The problem is that I don’t know if I have enough tools to do it. How about going to the bike store to buy the missing items? Of course, I’m going to fix it for you if I have all necessary tools I hope you understand Nam. Sorry again. I really hope you aren’t too upset See you soon Manh
Dear Nam

How are you and the family going? I hope you enjoyed your
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holiday and
we could drink coffee together after your return journey. I’m afraid that I’m writing this letter to
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make
an apology to
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you


You know that I said that I could look after your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
last week when you had a trip with your family? I'm
really
sorry
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but
I’ve
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just
noticed that I forgot to
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fix
your
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bike
. I haven’t
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got
a clue how it
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happened


Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
feel terrible as I know your
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bike’s
chain and petals
were broken
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
tried to
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fix
it
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but
, unfortunately, your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
didn’t have full equipment.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
probably
should have
Use past participle here: "reminded".
remind
to bring my bicycle toolbox to your
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house


Of course
, I’m going to either bring my box to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fix
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bike
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
. The problem is that I don’t know if I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
tools to do it. How about going to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bike
store to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
the missing items?
Of course
, I’m going to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fix
it for you if I have all necessary
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tools


I hope you understand Nam. Sorry again. I
really
hope you aren’t too
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upset


This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon


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Manh

IELTS letter You have been looking after your friend’s house while they were on holiday. However, you have forgotten to do something that they asked you to do before they left. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Apologise to your friend Explain how you forgot to do what they asked Offer something to make up for the mistake

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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