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You have been looking after your friend’s house while they were on holiday. However, you have forgotten to do something that they asked you to do before they left. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Apologise to your friend Explain how you forgot to do what they asked Offer something to make up for the mistake

You have been looking after your friend’s house while they were on holiday. However, you have forgotten to do something that they asked you to do before they left. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Apologise to your friend Explain how you forgot to do what they asked Offer something to make up for the mistake eb5oO

Dear Nam How are you and the family going? I hope you enjoyed your holiday and we could drink coffee together after your return journey. I’m afraid that I’m writing this letter to make an apology to you You know that I said that I could look after your house last week when you had a trip with your family? I'm really sorry but I’ve just noticed that I forgot to fix your bike. I haven’t got a clue how it happened I feel terrible as I know your bike’s chain and petals were broken. I tried to fix it but, unfortunately, your house didn’t have full equipment. I probably should have remind to bring my bicycle toolbox to your house Of course, I’m going to either bring my box to fix your bike only. The problem is that I don’t know if I have enough tools to do it. How about going to the bike store to buy the missing items? Of course, I’m going to fix it for you if I have all necessary tools I hope you understand Nam. Sorry again. I really hope you aren’t too upset See you soon Manh

Dear Nam

How are you and the family going? I hope you enjoyed your Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).holiday, and
holiday and
 we could drink coffee together after your return journey. I’m afraid that I’m writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 an apology to Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphyou.you!you?you:you,you;
you


You know that I said that I could look after your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 last week when you had a trip with your family? I'm really
 sorry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I’ve This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 noticed that I forgot to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmessdilemma
fix
 your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
bike
. I haven’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a clue how it Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphhappened.happened!happened?happened:happened,happened;
happened


Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 feel terrible as I know your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
bike’s
 chain and petals were broken
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 tried to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmessdilemma
fix
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, unfortunately, your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 didn’t have full equipment. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
probably
 should have Use past participle here: "reminded".reminded
remind
 to bring my bicycle toolbox to your Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphhouse.house!house?house:house,house;
house


Of course
, I’m going to either bring my box to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmessdilemma
fix
 your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
bike
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. The problem is that I don’t know if I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 tools to do it. How about going to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
bike
 store to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the missing items? Of course
, I’m going to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmessdilemma
fix
 it for you if I have all necessary Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphtools.tools!tools?tools:tools,tools;
tools


I hope you understand Nam. Sorry again. I really
 hope you aren’t too Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphupset.upset!upset?upset:upset,upset;
upset


This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon


Possible spelling mistake found.ManyManMathMannMachMani
Manh