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Write a letter to a manager of furniture company regarding the purchase you made and the problems you had when delivery arrived.

Write a letter to a manager of furniture company regarding the purchase you made and the problems you had when delivery arrived. awA6X
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about the defective furniture that was delivered by your company. The eight-piece wood-and-glass dining set (Order number 77779) that I ordered on April 2 was delivered yesterday. As I was away on business that day, my neighbour, who has a key to my apartment) accepted the packaged set and signed for it without question. However, when I opened the teak wood dining table myself with great care, I found that two of the glass inserts were badly scratched and one was broken. I cannot accept the table in this state and want to receive a replacement as soon as possible. In my opinion, the damage seemed to be caused by inadequate packaging. In case you have any questions feel free to call me at 9888195776. Hoping for a prompt reply from your side! Yours faithfully, XYZ
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about the defective furniture that
was delivered
by your
company
.

The eight-piece wood-and-glass dining set (Order number 77779) that I ordered on April 2
was delivered
yesterday. As I was away on business that day, my
neighbour
, who has a key to my apartment
)
accepted
the packaged set and signed for it without question.
However
, when I opened the teak wood dining table myself with great care, I found that two of the glass inserts were
badly
scratched and one
was broken
.

I cannot accept the table in this state and want to receive a replacement as
soon
as possible. In my opinion, the damage seemed to
be caused
by inadequate packaging. In case you have any questions feel free to call me at 9888195776.

Hoping for a prompt reply from your side!

Yours
faithfully
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a manager of furniture company regarding the purchase you made and the problems you had when delivery arrived.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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