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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Monica Geller and I am writing to offer my sincere apologies for not being able to attend the interview, which has been scheduled to be held at 9: 00 am on Februrary 14, 2021, in your college for joining the Accountancy course. Firstly, I would like to thank you for inviting me for the interview. However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to attend the same at the specified time due to a prior appointment. My x is unwell and has been undergoing treatment at the State Hospital on a weekly basis. Her medical appointment coincides with the time and date of the interview. Since, this treatment is very critical for her health and no one else is available to accompany her, I cannot cancel the same. I sincerely apologise for not being able to make it to the interview at the specified time. This course is important for my career and hence I request you to allot a different time the same day or another day for my interview. I am sorry for the inconvenience caused. I also request you to share the duration of the interview and whether any tests would be conducted during the same. I hope you understand my situation and decide favourably. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours sincerely, Monica Geller
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Monica
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Geller and
I am writing to offer my sincere apologies for not being able to attend the
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interview
, which has
been scheduled
to
be held
at 9: 00 am on
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Februrary
14, 2021, in your college for joining the Accountancy course.

Firstly
, I would like to thank you for inviting me for the
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interview
.
However
, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to attend the same at the specified
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
due to a prior appointment. My x is unwell and has been undergoing treatment at the State Hospital on a weekly basis. Her medical appointment coincides with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and date of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
. Since, this treatment is
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very
critical for her health and no one else is available to accompany her, I cannot cancel the same.

I
sincerely
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apologise
for not being able to
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make
it to the
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interview
at the specified
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. This course is
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important
for my career and
hence
I request you to allot a
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different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
the same day or another day for my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
. I am sorry for the inconvenience caused. I
also
request you to share the duration of the
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interview
and whether any
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tests
would
be conducted
during the same.

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I
hope you understand my situation and decide
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favourably
. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

Yours
sincerely
,

Monica Geller
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IELTS letter You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
228 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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