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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude, as you had saved my life when I met with a terrible car accident. I am Siva Narayanaraj, staying in Brampton. Last week, while driving back home from office, I accidentally had a huge crash with the truck near sandalway-Dundas intersection. Fortunately, you saw me unconscious in the road and and saved my life, by admitting in the nearby hospital on time. I sincerely extend my appreciation on providing the much needed help and support, even though I am a stranger to you. I got to know from the hospital staffs, that you had stayed with me the whole night until my family arrived. I am in short of words to express my gratitude. I would like to invite you and your family to my home as a token of gratitude. Please let me know when you are available and I will plan accordingly. Thank you so much for your help and support. Hope to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Siva Narayanaraj
Dear Mr. Johnson,

I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude, as you had saved my life when I met with a terrible car accident.

I am Siva
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Narayanaraj
, staying in Brampton. Last week, while driving back home from office, I
accidentally
had a huge crash with the truck near
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sandalway-Dundas
intersection.
Fortunately
, you
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saw
me unconscious in the road
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and and
saved my life, by admitting in the nearby hospital on time.

I
sincerely
extend my appreciation on providing the
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much needed
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help
and support,
even though
I am a stranger to you. I
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got
to know from the hospital staffs, that you had stayed with me the whole night until my family arrived.
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I
am in short of words to express my gratitude.

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I
would like to invite you and your family to my home as a token of gratitude.
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Please
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let
me know when you are available and I will plan
accordingly
.

Thank you
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so
much for your
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help
and support. Hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Siva
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Narayanaraj
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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174 words
6.0
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