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Asking your former teach to write a letter of recommendation

Dear Mr Chan, It has been a few months since we last spoke. I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to ask if you could write a letter of reference in support of my job application as an IT Project Manager. As a result of my extensive work experience in information technology, I would like to take the next step forward. Moreover, in this new position, I will be handling diverse projects related to infrastructure and application development. Being a project manager is significant to my career’s progress because the experience that I will get from this undertaking will aid me to work on my weaknesses. Furthermore, it has always been my passion to work with various kinds of people and I will continue to do so as Project Manager. If you should decide to write a reference letter for me, may I suggest including my positive traits which I showed during my tenure as one of your laboratory assistants. Thank you very much for your time and support. Best Regards, Louis Panganiban
Dear Mr Chan,

It has been a few months since we last spoke. I hope this letter finds you well.

I am writing to ask if you could write a letter of reference in support of my job application as an IT
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Project
Manager.

As a result
of my extensive work experience in information technology, I would like to take the
next
step forward.
Moreover
, in this new position, I will be handling diverse
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
related to infrastructure and application development.

Being a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
manager is significant to my career’s progress
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because
the experience that I will
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get
from this undertaking will aid me to work on my weaknesses.
Furthermore
, it has always been my passion to work with various kinds of
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people
and I will continue to do
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so
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Project
Manager.

If you should decide to write a reference letter for me, may I suggest including my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
traits which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
during my tenure as one of your laboratory assistants.

Thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much for your time and support.

Best Regards,

Louis
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Panganiban

IELTS letter Asking your former teach to write a letter of recommendation

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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