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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.

There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . , dOP6
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to draw your kind attention towards the issues the residents of Kaushambi facing nowadays. The charted buses which are running from Edm mall to Vaishali during morning hours are not safe for the citizens. last week, me and my 5 years old daughter were going to hospital for routine checkup and we were waiting for bus to arrive at bus station after waiting for 30 minutes no bus arrived, though frequency of bus is every 5 minutes although, it did not came. After waiting for an hour one bus came but, the driver did not stopped at the bus station which leads us into problem. This is not only once these types of incidents happened several times. Even the conductor do not keep right type of currency they never gives back change. I request the concerened authority to keep a check at regular interval and keep assurance that conductor should return change and if possible make facility of ticket online. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully Aditi vij
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your kind attention towards the issues the residents of
Kaushambi
facing nowadays. The charted buses which are running from
Edm
mall to
Vaishali
during morning hours are not safe for the citizens.

last
week, me and my 5 years
old
daughter were going to hospital for routine
checkup and
we were waiting for bus to arrive at bus station after waiting for 30 minutes no bus arrived, though frequency of bus is every 5 minutes although, it did not
came
. After waiting for an hour one bus came
but
, the driver did not
stopped
at the bus station which leads us into problem. This is not
only
once these types of incidents happened several times. Even the conductor do not
keep
right type of currency they never gives back
change
.

I request the
concerened
authority to
keep
a
check
at regular interval and
keep
assurance that conductor should return
change
and if possible
make
facility of ticket online.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
Faithfully


Aditi
vij
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IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . ,

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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