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One of your friends wants to apply a for a job involving working with foreign teenagers write a letter of suggestion for him aur hair include the following points convince him or her in the cultural difference give suggestion based on your professional experience explain the challenges involved in the job

One of your friends wants to apply a for a job involving working with foreign teenagers write a letter of suggestion for him aur hair include the following points convince him or her in the cultural difference give suggestion based on your professional experience explain the challenges involved in the job YWON
Dear Riya, I hope this letter finds you and your family in the pink of your health and spirits. I am congratulate your effort to coming in the UK as a social worker. I have to give some suggestions regarding the country. Because I feel it is very inherent for you before coming here. Comparing to our home country and the UK culture is absolutely different so you have to research about food coma cloth and living cost of UK. You should be make sure if you buy a cloth it is suitable with the climate here. Otherwise you will be some trouble. When I came the country I felt very awkwardness to adjust with the environment and promotional deals. First of all the climate is utterly different from India, so in 6 days make a knot adjustable. Then the living cost also problem for us so we have to make good budget plan your initial days. the important challenges which we are facing our profession is communication barrier. As a social worker we have to deal with the people and take voluntary activities. So initial stages we struggle to maintain contacts with others. I know that you are going to come community development sector. There Daya you should make more contact in the field because it will help you to implement plants. Otherwise, become burden. If you need any help feel free to talk me. I looking forward to seeing you soon. Best regards, Ahina
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challenges which we are facing our profession is communication barrier. As a social worker we
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deal with the
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people
and take voluntary activities.
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So
initial stages we struggle to maintain contacts with others. I know that you are going to
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come
community development sector. There
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more contact in the field
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because
it will
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help
you to implement plants.
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, become burden.
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If
you need any
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feel free to talk me.
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forward to seeing you
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. Best regards,
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Ahina
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IELTS letter One of your friends wants to apply a for a job involving working with foreign teenagers write a letter of suggestion for him aur hair include the following points convince him or her in the cultural difference give suggestion based on your professional experience explain the challenges involved in the job

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  American English
1 paragraphs
245 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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