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Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • offer to help him/her to move • explain how exactly you can help • ask him/her some questions about the new house

Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • offer to help him/her to move • explain how exactly you can help • ask him/her some questions about the new house 1gxW
Dear Alex, How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I was really happy to see your letter this Monday, since then I intended to write to you but finally got time to put down pen to paper. I'm glad that you’re shifting on a weekend and I sure you must be terrified but don't worry I’ll help you out with packing and moving. Additionally, I'm familiar to that locality and can show you around some good restaurants, grocery stores as well as medical centre. We could move some small cartons in my car, and I have a friend who works for a moving company, he could quote you a cheaper deal than the usual rates. Moreover, I’ve got some spare cartons in my storage, I’ll get them along. However, tell me how big is your new house? How many rooms you have? I'm sure you must have at least checked if it's well connected to the public transport and the supermarkets. I'll come to your place on Saturday morning around 7am, do let me know if your ok with it. Write back soon and take care. Best Regards, Nikita
Dear Alex,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I was
really
happy to
see
your letter this Monday, since then I intended to write to you
but
finally
got
time to put down pen to paper.

I
'm glad that you’re shifting on a weekend and I sure you
must
be terrified
but
don't worry I’ll
help
you out with packing and moving.
Additionally
, I'm familiar to that locality and can
show
you around
some
good
restaurants, grocery stores
as well
as medical
centre
.

We could
move
some
small
cartons in my car, and I have a friend who works for a moving
company
, he could quote you a cheaper deal than the usual rates.
Moreover
, I’ve
got
some
spare cartons in my storage, I’ll
get
them along.

However
,
tell
me how
big
is your new
house
? How
many
rooms you have? I'm sure you
must
have at least
checked
if it's
well connected
to the public transport and the supermarkets. I'll
come
to your place on Saturday morning around 7am, do
let
me know if your ok with it.

Write back
soon
and take care.

Best Regards,

Nikita
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IELTS letter Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • offer to help him/her to move • explain how exactly you can help • ask him/her some questions about the new house

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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