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Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • offer to help him/her to move • explain how exactly you can help • ask him/her some questions about the new house

Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • offer to help him/her to move • explain how exactly you can help • ask him/her some questions about the new house 1gxW

Dear Alex, How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I was really happy to see your letter this Monday, since then I intended to write to you but finally got time to put down pen to paper. I'm glad that you’re shifting on a weekend and I sure you must be terrified but don't worry I’ll help you out with packing and moving. Additionally, I'm familiar to that locality and can show you around some good restaurants, grocery stores as well as medical centre. We could move some small cartons in my car, and I have a friend who works for a moving company, he could quote you a cheaper deal than the usual rates. Moreover, I’ve got some spare cartons in my storage, I’ll get them along. However, tell me how big is your new house? How many rooms you have? I'm sure you must have at least checked if it's well connected to the public transport and the supermarkets. I'll come to your place on Saturday morning around 7am, do let me know if your ok with it. Write back soon and take care. Best Regards, Nikita

Dear Alex,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I was really
 happy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 your letter this Monday, since then I intended to write to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
finally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 time to put down pen to paper.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm glad that you’re shifting on a weekend and I sure you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be terrified
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 don't worry I’ll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you out with packing and moving. Additionally
, I'm familiar to that locality and can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 you around This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 restaurants, grocery stores as well
 as medical Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
.

We could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 cartons in my car, and I have a friend who works for a moving This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, he could quote you a cheaper deal than the usual rates. Moreover
, I’ve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 spare cartons in my storage, I’ll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 them along.

However
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 is your new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
? How This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 rooms you have? I'm sure you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have at least This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 if it's This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-connected
well connected
 to the public transport and the supermarkets. I'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to your place on Saturday morning around 7am, do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if your ok with it.

Write back This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and take care.

Best Regards,

Nikita