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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. Write at least 150 words.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. aKdo
Respected Eric, In the present scenario, in Information Technology Industry which is changing very rapidly and new technology is being incorporated every day, to be on same page I want to get enrolled in the Course as Project Management Information Certificate. This Certificate provides the knowledge about how to manage the large scales projects during its life cycle. We all are aware that in 2020 the overall success rate of Projects in IT industry was only 20 percentage, which is far less and the industry faces the loss of 500 billions dollars. So when they identified it was revealed that loss happens due to insufficient knowledge about the Project Management by the concerned Manager and above authorities. This course provides consists of 13 different knowledges areas which are Stakeholders Management, Risk Management, Schedule Management, Human resource Management etc. By having complete knowledge about these 13 Knowledge areas would provide a better understanding how our company would manage these areas and what skills set would be required by the team members, so that we would be able to achieve the goals as desired by company. By doing this course it would help me in managing the projects in company and I would like to have a some waiver off from company that this course commence off 8 days, so I would be on leave from 10/03/2021 till 17/03/2021, so kindly grant me the leave for 8 days, so I can be certified in Project Management Information Technology Certified. With your Faithfully, Anuj Mehta
Respected Eric, In the present scenario, in Information Technology Industry which is changing
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very
rapidly
and new technology is
being incorporated
every day, to be on same page I want to
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get
enrolled in the
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Course
as
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Project
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Management
Information Certificate. This Certificate provides the
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knowledge
about how to manage the large scales
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projects
during its life cycle. We all are aware that in 2020 the
overall
success rate of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Projects
in IT industry was
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only
20 percentage, which is far less and the industry faces the loss of 500 billions dollars.
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So
when they identified it
was revealed
that loss happens due to insufficient
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knowledge
about the
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Project
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Management
by the concerned Manager and above authorities. This
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course
provides consists of 13
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different
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knowledges
areas which are Stakeholders
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Management
,
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Risk
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Management
, Schedule
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Management
, Human resource
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Management
etc. By having complete
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knowledge
about these 13
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Knowledge
areas would provide a better understanding how our
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company
would manage these areas and what
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skills
set would
be required
by the team members,
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so
that we would be able to achieve the goals as desired by
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company
. By doing this
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course
it would
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help
me in managing the
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projects
in
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company
and I would like to have a
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some
waiver off from
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company
that this
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course
commence off 8 days,
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so
I would be on
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leave
from
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10/03/2021
till
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17/03/2021
,
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so
kindly grant me the
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leave
for 8 days,
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so
I can
be certified
in
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Project
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Management
Information Technology Certified.

With your
Faithfully
,
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Anuj
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Mehta
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IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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