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You have been asked to write a report for the World Information Organisation on the following topic: What are the greatest threats to the environment in your country today? What are the solutions?

You have been asked to write a report for the World Information Organisation on the following topic: What are the greatest threats to the environment in your country today? What are the solutions? o8o9b
Title: Threats to the environment in Italy Introduction: This report is intended to discuss about the greatest threats to the natural environment in Italy and some possible solutions about them. Findings: The findings clearly show that overall the Italians are dealing with this problem quite well. As a matter of fact, many cities have recently introduced an efficient way to recycle rubbish, which consists in having different bins for each type of material of litter. This method is very effective in light of the fact that it permits to recycle instead of burning rubbish. However, there are still some practices which are not sustainable at all. For example, in the agriculture many companies use some fertilizers which are a kind of poison. These substances are absorbed by the soil and are transferred to aquifers and then to the water, so that they represents a danger not only for plants, but for all the aquatic environment. Moreover, in Italy there is the problem of atmospheric pollution. In fact, there are still many old factories which release a big quantity of gas in the atmosphere and contribute to global warming. Reccomandations: As far as the agriculture is concerned, I would recommend to make the use of natural and sustainable fertilizers mandatory by law. Thus, not only the nature will see beneficial effects, but also humans because the food we eat will no be contaminated by this chemical substances. Whereas, a remedy to the atmospheric pollution can be some incentives given by the government to those company which became eco-sustainable.
Title:

Threats to the environment in Italy

Introduction:

This report
is intended
to
discuss about the
greatest threats to the natural environment in Italy and
some
possible solutions about them.

Findings:

The findings
clearly
show
that
overall
the Italians are dealing with this problem quite well. As a matter of fact,
many
cities have recently introduced an efficient way to recycle rubbish, which consists in having
different
bins for each type of material of litter. This method is
very
effective in light of the fact that it permits
to recycle
instead
of burning rubbish.

However
, there are
still
some
practices which are not sustainable at all.
For example
, in the agriculture
many
companies
use
some
fertilizers which are a kind of poison. These substances
are absorbed
by the soil and
are transferred
to aquifers and then to the water,
so
that they
represents
a
danger
not
only
for plants,
but
for all the aquatic environment.

Moreover
, in Italy there is the problem of atmospheric pollution. In fact, there are
still
many
old
factories which release a
big
quantity of gas in the atmosphere and contribute to global warming.

Reccomandations
:

As far as the agriculture
is concerned
, I would recommend to
make
the
use
of natural and sustainable fertilizers mandatory by law.
Thus
, not
only
the nature will
see
beneficial effects,
but
also
humans
because
the food we eat will
no
be contaminated
by this chemical substances.
Whereas
, a remedy to the atmospheric pollution can be
some
incentives
given
by the
government
to those
company
which became
eco-sustainable
.
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IELTS letter You have been asked to write a report for the World Information Organisation on the following topic: What are the greatest threats to the environment in your country today? What are the solutions?

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