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You have just returned from a holiday abroad and want to tell your English-speaking friend about your trip. Write a letter to your friend. In this letter: Where you went and how you travelled there Something interesting you did A problem that you had

You have just returned from a holiday abroad and want to tell your English-speaking friend about your trip. Write a letter to your friend. In this letter: Where you went and how you travelled there Something interesting you did A problem that you had o8Xpw
Dear Andrew How are you? How is your family? I’ve just wanted to write a quick letter to tell you about my holiday abroad in England. As you know, Phuong and I flew up to London one month ago, and we picked up a hire car to go to West London. This was the place which had bumper-to-bumper traffic. It took us 50 minutes to drive to our hotel because we had a traffic jam. Apart from that, we had a wonderful time. We had an opportunity to come to the Emirates Stadium, where I was only seen on my TV. Moreover, both of us were very interested when we saw our football idol in real life because both of us were huge fans of Arsenal Club, whose home was Emirates. Unfortunately, when we had come back to our hotel, we were both attacked and had been stolen by a pickpocket. Luckily, after we had called the police, they arrested that thief and I was given my wallet back with full money. Maybe you had to be careful with the go up of pickpockets in England. Anyway, I’ll tell you more about it when we meet next time. See you soon Minh
Dear Andrew

How are you? How is your family? I’ve
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you about my holiday abroad in England.

As you know,
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and I flew up to London one month ago, and we picked up a hire car to go to West London. This was the place which had bumper-to-bumper traffic. It took us 50 minutes to drive to our hotel
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because
we had a traffic jam.

Apart from that, we had a wonderful time. We had an opportunity to
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come
to the Emirates Stadium, where I was
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only
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seen
on my TV.
Moreover
, both of us were
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very
interested when we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
our football idol in real life
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because
both of us were huge fans of Arsenal Club, whose home was Emirates.

Unfortunately, when we had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
back to our hotel, we were both attacked and had
been stolen
by a pickpocket. Luckily, after we had called the police, they arrested that
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thief and
I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
my wallet back with full money. Maybe you had to be careful with the go up of pickpockets in England.

Anyway, I’ll
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you more about it when we
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meet
next
time.

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See
you
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soon


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IELTS letter You have just returned from a holiday abroad and want to tell your English-speaking friend about your trip. Write a letter to your friend. In this letter: Where you went and how you travelled there Something interesting you did A problem that you had

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  American English
8 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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