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You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for 2 weeks, and you want one of your friends to go with you.

You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for 2 weeks, and you want one of your friends to go with you. kby5W
Dear James, I hope you find this letter in best of your health. I am really excited to inform that, I have planned a 2 weeks international vacation and would really appreciate if you can accompany me for the same. We had great fun on our last visit to Goa and this will be a memorable one. To brief you we will be going to Dubai for holidays mid next month, and if my calculations are correct we will be spending around 3 to 4 lakh Rupees in total. This costs will include our travel tickets, our local transportation over there and also food. Secondly, I have selected few world renowned destinations as our itinerary. Likely, Bruj Khalifa, Ferrari World, Gold Souk and Desert Safari. You can suggest more as we will be having sufficient time to cover other attractions. Moreover we also need to check out the night life as I have received numerous positive reviews. I will await your revert, nonetheless have already started shopping and packing out of excitement. See you soon. Regards, Hopes Piper
Dear James,

I hope you find this letter in best of your health. I am
really
excited to inform that, I have planned a 2 weeks international vacation and would
really
appreciate if you can accompany me for the same. We had great fun on our last visit to Goa and this will be a memorable one.

To brief you we will be going to Dubai for holidays mid
next
month, and if my calculations are correct we will be spending around 3 to 4 lakh Rupees in total. This costs will include our travel tickets, our local transportation over there and
also
food.
Secondly
, I have selected few world renowned destinations as our itinerary. Likely,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Bruj
Khalifa, Ferrari World, Gold Souk and Desert Safari. You can suggest more
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
we will be having sufficient time to cover other attractions.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Moreover
we
also
need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
out the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
night life
as I have received numerous
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reviews.

I will await your revert, nonetheless have already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
shopping and packing out of excitement.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Regards,

Hopes Piper
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IELTS letter You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for 2 weeks, and you want one of your friends to go with you.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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