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You recently organized an event that was mentioned in a newspaper article. The article had some incorrect information about the event. Write a letter to the newspaper editor

You recently organized an event that was mentioned in a newspaper article. The article had some incorrect information about the event. Write a letter to the newspaper editor JKPEj
Dear Mr. Brown, I have fond of reading. Specially, I like to read newspaper which published by you. However, I am writing a letter to draw your attention about an article on the Seminar for The Indirect Taxes which had been published with wrong contents in your newspaper on January 01, 1990. Actually, the Seminar was conducted on the Direct Taxes (Income Tax) and I had invited Mrs. Parera (Income Tax Commissioner) as a chief Guest. Unfortunately, these information had been completely missed out in the article which was the main topic of the article. These was the actual points and I would like to request you to please take correct measures to avoid these types of errors in the future in order to maintain your creditability in readers. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully
Dear Mr. Brown,

I have fond of reading.
Specially
, I like to read newspaper which published by you.
However
, I am writing a letter to draw your attention about an article on the Seminar for The Indirect
Taxes
which had
been published
with
wrong
contents in your newspaper on January 01, 1990.

Actually, the Seminar
was conducted
on the Direct
Taxes
(Income
Tax)
and I had invited Mrs.
Parera
(Income
Tax
Commissioner) as a chief Guest. Unfortunately,
these information
had been completely missed out in the article which was the main topic of the article.

These
was the actual points and I would like to request you to
please
take correct measures to avoid these types of errors in the future in order to maintain your creditability in readers.

I look forward
to hear
from you.

Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter You recently organized an event that was mentioned in a newspaper article. The article had some incorrect information about the event. Write a letter to the newspaper editor

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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