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You recently organized an event that was mentioned in a newspaper article. The article had some incorrect information about the event. Write a letter to the newspaper editor

You recently organized an event that was mentioned in a newspaper article. The article had some incorrect information about the event. Write a letter to the newspaper editor JKPEj

Dear Mr. Brown, I have fond of reading. Specially, I like to read newspaper which published by you. However, I am writing a letter to draw your attention about an article on the Seminar for The Indirect Taxes which had been published with wrong contents in your newspaper on January 01, 1990. Actually, the Seminar was conducted on the Direct Taxes (Income Tax) and I had invited Mrs. Parera (Income Tax Commissioner) as a chief Guest. Unfortunately, these information had been completely missed out in the article which was the main topic of the article. These was the actual points and I would like to request you to please take correct measures to avoid these types of errors in the future in order to maintain your creditability in readers. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully

Dear Mr. Brown,

I have fond of reading. Specially
, I like to read newspaper which published by you. However
, I am writing a letter to draw your attention about an article on the Seminar for The Indirect You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
Taxes
 which had been published
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 contents in your newspaper on January 01, 1990.

Actually, the Seminar was conducted
 on the Direct You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
Taxes
 (Income You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
Tax)
 and I had invited Mrs. Possible spelling mistake found.PierreParrParkaParryParerParers
Parera
 (Income You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
Tax
 Commissioner) as a chief Guest. Unfortunately, Did you mean "this information" or "these informations"?this informationthese informations
these information
 had been completely missed out in the article which was the main topic of the article.

Did you mean "this"?This
These
 was the actual points and I would like to request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 take correct measures to avoid these types of errors in the future in order to maintain your creditability in readers.

I look forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you.

Yours faithfully

IELTS letter You recently organized an event that was mentioned in a newspaper article. The article had some incorrect information about the event. Write a letter to the newspaper editor

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

137 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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