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Describe a funny story that happened to you.

Describe a funny story that happened to you. aVD0V
One such humorous incident that recently happened to me is when I was hanging out with my friends four months ago. It was a Sunday morning when we had time after days of studying in Ho Chi Minh city and came back to our hometown - Binh Duong province. There had been thunderous rain, so we spent time chatting at a popular coffee shop in town called ‘Co Bon’. There was nothing strange until one of our haters arrived at that coffee shop. Then, she instantaneously recognized us and started acting like she was extremely close to us to sit with us since the shop was out of the table. When we were in high school, she was the most hypocritical person I had ever met because she stabbed everyone and bootlicked those who were beneficial to her. Next, all of a sudden, her chair broke and she fell painfully on the ground. We were all so surprised by that and completely satisfied. That was one of the remarkable moments that I would never forget.
One such humorous incident that recently happened to me is when I was hanging out with my friends four months ago. It was a Sunday morning when we had time after days of studying in
Ho Chi Minh city
and came back to our hometown
-
Binh
Duong
province. There had been thunderous rain,
so
we spent time chatting at a popular coffee shop in town called ‘Co
Bon
’. There was nothing strange until one of our haters arrived at that coffee shop. Then, she
instantaneously
recognized us and
started
acting like she was
extremely
close to us to sit with us since the shop was out of the table. When we were in high school, she was the most hypocritical person I had ever met
because
she stabbed everyone and
bootlicked
those who were beneficial to her.
Next
, all of a sudden, her chair
broke and
she fell
painfully
on the ground. We were all
so
surprised by that and completely satisfied. That was one of the remarkable moments that I would never forget.
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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