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Last week, your friend looked after your children so you can attend a wedding. Write a letter to your friend, in your letter: Thank them looking after the children Describe the wedding Invite your friend to dinner to say thank you

Last week, your friend looked after your children so you can attend a wedding. Write a letter to your friend, in your letter: Thank them looking after the children Describe the wedding Invite your friend to dinner to say thank you OlJPj
Dear Quang I’m writing this letter to say how much I appreciated with the thing that you did for me last week Last week, my friend invited me to go to his wedding ceremony in the centre of Ha Noi. My wife went to the office early and came back home at midnight. Luckily, thanks to your babysitting, I not only had been able to go to my friend’s wedding ceremony, but I also came back home before the time my wife went back home for the office. This event was organized at 8 a. m at Sao Mai restaurant. I travelled to this place at 8. 05 a. m. After being greeted by Long, who is my best friend in University, I was invited to sit close to his desk. I enjoyed many delicious dishes during this ceremony, but I travelled to my house because of being drunken. To show my gratitude for what you did, I wanted to invite you to have a square meal with us on Saturday Afternoon and I prepared some refresh drinks for you and me. I’d be happy to see your appearance at this time. Anyway, you can write back to me when you receive my letter. See you soon Minh.
Dear
Quang


I’m writing this letter to say how much I appreciated with the thing that you did for me last week

Last week, my friend invited me to go to his wedding ceremony in the
centre
of Ha
Noi
. My wife went to the office early and came
back
home at midnight. Luckily, thanks to your babysitting, I not
only
had been able to go to my friend’s wedding ceremony,
but
I
also
came
back
home
before
the time my wife went
back
home for the office.

This
event
was organized
at 8 a. m at
Sao
Mai restaurant. I travelled to this place at 8. 05 a. m. After
being greeted
by Long, who is my best friend in University, I
was invited
to sit close to his desk. I enjoyed
many
delicious dishes during this ceremony,
but
I travelled to my
house
because
of being drunken.

To
show
my gratitude for what you did, I wanted to invite you to have a square meal with us on Saturday Afternoon and I prepared
some
refresh drinks for you and me. I’d be happy to
see
your appearance at this time.

Anyway, you can write
back
to me when you receive my letter.

See
you
soon


Minh
.
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IELTS letter Last week, your friend looked after your children so you can attend a wedding. Write a letter to your friend, in your letter: Thank them looking after the children Describe the wedding Invite your friend to dinner to say thank you

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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