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You have arranged a meeting with a business partner. Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangements. Write a letter to your partner: Explain the new arrangements. Apologise for the changes. Explain the reasons why the changes were needed.

You have arranged a meeting with a business partner. Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangements. Write a letter to your partner: Explain the new arrangements. Apologise for the changes. Explain the reasons why the changes were needed. QaWP
Dear Mr. Patel, I am writing this letter to apologise for the changes in the venue and date of our business meeting. We were to meet on Monday, the 22nd March for discuss our new product launch on next month at Delhi. I sincerly apologise for these changes. I can understand you must have planned everything for the 22nd March and it is very irksome to make last minute changes in plans. Actually, my grand father heart patient. He was to came heart attack on last night and admitted at hospital near my house. Moreover, my parents are attending wedding in our near one at out of town. Hence, it is my responsibility to take care of my grand father. I think at least one week to stay at hospital and totally give bad rest too him by doctor advice. That is why I had to change the arrangements of our business meeting. I hope you understand my predicament. I once again apologise for the inconvenience caused to you. Now we shall meet on 27th March instead of 22nd March and the same venue will be Ramada Hotel at Delhi. Hoping to see you on the 27th at Ramada. Yours Sincerely, Rinkal Makasana
Dear Mr. Patel,

I am writing this letter to
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apologise
for the
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changes
in the venue and date of our business meeting. We were to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
on Monday, the 22nd March for discuss our new product launch on
next
month at Delhi.

I
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sincerly
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apologise
for these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
changes
. I can understand you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have planned everything for the 22nd March and it is
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very
irksome to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
last minute
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
changes
in plans. Actually, my grand father heart patient. He was to came heart attack on last night and admitted at hospital near my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
Moreover
, my parents are attending wedding in our near one at out of town.
Hence
, it is my responsibility to take care of my grand father. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
at least one week to stay at hospital and
totally
give
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
rest too him by doctor advice.
That is
why I had to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
the arrangements of our business meeting. I hope you understand my predicament.

I once again
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apologise
for the inconvenience caused to you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
we shall
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
on 27th March
instead
of 22nd March and the same venue will be Ramada Hotel at Delhi.

Hoping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you on the 27th at Ramada.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Rinkal
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Makasana
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IELTS letter You have arranged a meeting with a business partner. Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangements. Write a letter to your partner: Explain the new arrangements. Apologise for the changes. Explain the reasons why the changes were needed.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
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