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You have arranged a meeting with a business partner. Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangements. Write a letter to your partner.

You have arranged a meeting with a business partner. Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangements. Write a letter to your partner. LqLJp
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about the meeting which arranged by us and I'm sorry to told you that I have changed some arrangement, venue and date for the meeting. I have arranged the meeting on 8th January and there are limited sit are available so I change the room and add some more sit. We had select the venue so far from our office so change it and new place is very near from our office. I'm really apologise for the change because I have other important work in my family. As you know my father has asthma problem so, I have appointment to conduct doctor at the same day on 5th January due to I have not attend the meeting. Consequently, I have take this decision on behalf of our other partner too. Appologies from bottom of my heart for the unconvenience and I'm send you the final address on your mail. I hope you could understand my problem. I am appology for unconvenience. Yours sincerely, Namrata Sonani.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the meeting which arranged by us and I'm sorry to
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told
you that I have
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changed
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some
arrangement, venue and date for the meeting.

I have arranged the meeting on 8th January and there
are limited
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sit
are available
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so
I
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change
the room and
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add
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some
more sit. We had select the venue
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so
far from our office
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so
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change
it and new place is
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very
The usual collocation for "near" is "to" not "from". Did you mean simply "near to" or "further from"?
near from our
office.

I'm
really
Consider using a past participle here: "apologised".
apologise
for the
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change
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because
I have other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
work in my family. As you know my father has asthma problem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I have appointment to conduct doctor at the same day on 5th January due to I have not
Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "attended".
attend
the meeting.
Consequently
, I have
Use past participle here: "taken".
take
this decision on behalf of our other partner too.

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Appologies
from bottom of my heart for the
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unconvenience
and I'm
Consider using a past participle here: "sent".
send
you the final address on your mail. I hope you could understand my problem.

I am
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appology
for
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unconvenience
.

Yours
sincerely
,
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Namrata
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Sonani
.
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IELTS letter You have arranged a meeting with a business partner. Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangements. Write a letter to your partner.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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