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You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to our neighbor, In your letter, • Describe the problem • Say how long it has been a problem • Explain the what action you want the neighbor to take

You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to our neighbor, In your letter, • Describe the problem • Say how long it has been a problem • Explain the what action you want the neighbor to take Mpxq
Dear John, I am writing to discuss to you a problem that is bothering me these past few months. I’ve noticed that every week, you have a visitor in your unit. This is clearly a violation the rules and regulation of our dormitory. It would just be fine if you are not making any noise, but, weekly, I cannot sleep due to the loud noise coming from your room. This has been a problem for the past 3 months and I would be grateful if you keep your noises down and let me sleep for the night. If it still occurs, I am sorry but I have to report you to the administration office so that they will have to take the necessary actions. I hope that you lessen the noise and hope we would not come to point where I need to report. Thank you, JG
Dear John,

I am writing to discuss to you a problem
that is
bothering me these past few months.

I’ve noticed that every week, you have a visitor in your unit. This is
clearly
a violation the
rules
and regulation of our dormitory. It would
just
be fine if you are not making any
noise
,
but
, weekly, I cannot sleep due to the loud
noise
coming from your room.

This has been a problem for the past 3 months and I would be grateful if you
keep
your
noises
down and
let
me sleep for the night. If it
still
occurs, I am sorry
but
I
have to
report you to the administration office
so
that they will
have to
take the necessary actions.

I hope that you lessen the
noise
and hope we would not
come
to point where I need to report.

Thank you,

JG
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IELTS letter You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to our neighbor, In your letter, • Describe the problem • Say how long it has been a problem • Explain the what action you want the neighbor to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
146 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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