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During a recent plane journey you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

During a recent plane journey you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job 1R9y
Dear Mr Ali, The objective of writing this letter is to remond you about our meeting on a plane journey last month. While traveling from Islamabad to Lahore we were on consecutive seats. During formal introduction i told you that i had completed my masters in hotrl management. And now doing an internship in one of a famous restaurantin Islamabad. You introduced yourself as an owner of a reputable chain of restaurants. In our short conversation you offered me that i will contact you after completion of my internship for placement in your restaurant. Now i am writing in this context my area of interest is management and also i have experienceof assistant manager reservation. I think i am suitable for this type of job because i am energetic and have good communication skills and also very enthusiastic about my career. So please consider my resume a copy of which is attached if there is a vacancy in your chain. I await a favorable response. Yours faithfully, Ahmed.
Dear Mr Ali, The objective of writing this letter is to
remond
you about our meeting on a
plane
journey
last month
.
While
traveling from Islamabad to Lahore we were on consecutive seats. During formal introduction
i
told
you that
i
had completed my masters in
hotrl
management. And
now
doing an internship in one of a
famous
restaurantin
Islamabad.

You introduced yourself as an owner of a reputable chain of restaurants. In our short conversation you offered me that
i
will contact you after completion of my internship for placement in your restaurant.

Now
i
am writing in this context my area of interest is management and
also
i
have
experienceof
assistant manager reservation. I
think
i
am suitable for this type of job
because
i
am energetic and have
good
communication
skills
and
also
very
enthusiastic about my career.

So
please
consider my resume a copy of which
is attached
if there is a vacancy in your chain. I await a favorable response. Yours
faithfully
, Ahmed.
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IELTS letter During a recent plane journey you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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