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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come K2Pw
Dear neighbour I am writing to let you know that I am Sam. I have recently moved into your neighborhood and me and my family have planned to through a party for our family and friends. Party is on Saturday evening at 5 o'clock. Let me give you more details about party. Party will start around 5 o'clock and will end till 9 o'clock. We have planned dinner along with some music for our guest. I hope you will not be bothered my music. We will try to keep as low as possible. Me and my family would like to apologize in advance if it would cause you disturbance. This is only one time function otherwise we are very quiet and peaceful family. Furthermore, we would really love if you and your whole family could join us on Saturday evening for our house warming party. Looking forward to see you at party Your neighbour Sam.
Dear
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I am writing to
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let
you know that I am Sam. I have recently
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moved
into your neighborhood and me and my
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family
have planned to through a
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party
for our
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family
and friends.
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Party
is on Saturday evening at 5 o'clock.

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Let
me give you more
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details
about
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party
.
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Party
will
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start
around 5 o'clock and will
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end
till 9 o'clock. We have planned dinner along with
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some
music for our guest. I hope you will not
be bothered
my music. We will try to
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keep
as low as possible.
When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.
Me
and my
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family
would like to apologize in advance if it would cause you disturbance. This is
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only
one time function
otherwise
we are
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very
quiet and peaceful family.

Furthermore
, we would
really
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love
if you and your whole
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family
could
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join
us on Saturday evening for our
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
house warming
party.

Looking forward to
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see
you at party

Your
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neighbour


Sam.

IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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