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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Amita Dholakia. I am writing this letter to correct the information about Watson Museum, which you wrote an article about the attractions of saurashtra. Watson Museum is well known museum of Rajkot, but it is written in an article that the Watson Museum is in Ahmedabad and it is cultural art collection in an international travel magazine. Actually, Watson Museum is the collection of precious objects from the princely state of Rajkot. I am from same town that is Rajkot, so I know bout this museum. It is more important to give the data correct in an international travel magazine because it is recognized by all over the world. Some tourists may be planning to travel India but they may find the information was wrong given by this magazine. Therefore they interpret information in this book some times may be incorrect. Thus, the sell of the magazine may decrease. It may affects polpularity of magazine among differnt states of world. I would say you to please correct this information in next month edition of magazine. Like this, it will attract the readers of this magazine; moreover, people who read this magazine they themselve do publicity, if the editor make a simple apology note and right about this correction. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Amita Dholakia
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is
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Amita
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Dholakia
. I am writing this letter to correct the
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information
about Watson
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Museum
, which you wrote an article about the attractions of
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saurashtra
. Watson
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Museum
is well known
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museum
of Rajkot,
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but
it
is written
in an article that the Watson
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Museum
is in Ahmedabad and it is cultural art collection in an international travel
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magazine
. Actually, Watson
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Museum
is the collection of precious objects from the
princely
state of Rajkot. I am from same town
that is
Rajkot,
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so
I know bout this museum.

It is more
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important
to give the data correct in an international travel
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magazine
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because
it
is recognized
by all over the world.
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Some
tourists may be planning to travel India
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but
they may find the
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information
was
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wrong
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given
by this
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magazine
.
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Therefore
they interpret
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information
in this book
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some
times may be incorrect.
Thus
, the sell of the
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magazine
may decrease. It may
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affects
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polpularity
of
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magazine
among
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differnt
states of world.

I would say you to
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please
correct this
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information
in
next
month edition of
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magazine
. Like this, it will attract the readers of this
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magazine
;
moreover
,
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people
who read this
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magazine
they
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themselve
do publicity, if the editor
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make
a simple apology note and right about this correction.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Amita
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Dholakia
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