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Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. • Mention about the current sports facilities available. •What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced. • How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. • Mention about the current sports facilities available. •What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced. • How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group. 9ypx
Dear Sir or Madam, I, John Smith, am writing this epistle to express or need for extra sports equipment required for the age category of 12-18 in our neighborhood. Currently, we have a park which is fenced properly. the facilities include running track, cricket ground with a well maintained pitch. However, games are not limited to these sports. In modern times, there are plethora of games all over the world like badminton, tennis, football and basketball. Which need to be developed and are in need of. A person like me find difficult to play games like this at this playground as it does not have enough space as well as the instrument to practice. Sports is very helpful in keeping a human being fit, active and healthy. It also helps in the development of brain in our particular age group. Henceforth, I would be very grateful if you would consider and act on this matter to enhance the provided means. Yours faithfully, John Smith
Dear Sir or Madam, I, John Smith,
am
writing this epistle to express or need for extra sports equipment required for the age category of 12-18 in our neighborhood.

Currently
, we have a park which
is fenced
properly
.
the
facilities include running
track
, cricket ground with a well maintained pitch.
However
, games are not limited to these sports. In modern times, there are plethora of games all over the world like badminton, tennis, football and basketball. Which need to
be developed
and are in need of.

A person like me find difficult to play games like this at this playground as it does not have
enough
space
as well
as the instrument to practice. Sports is
very
helpful in keeping a human
being fit
, active and healthy. It
also
helps
in the development of brain in our particular age group.

Henceforth, I would be
very
grateful if you would consider and act on this matter to enhance the provided means.

Yours
faithfully
, John Smith
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IELTS letter Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. • Mention about the current sports facilities available. •What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced. • How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
163 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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