Dear Adam,
My name is Alex Green, and I received your name and mailing address from a renowned magazine in Japan called Nara Pen Pals. I am very excited to have this opportunity to write to you and become pen pals. I hope you would write me back.
I’m currently working as a computer programmer in a large multinational company in Japan. I graduated from Waseda University with a Bachelor’s degree in computer science in December 2017. While I greatly enjoy my current job, I’m interested in pursuing a Master’s degree and hope to begin graduate studies next March. My hobbies include blogging, travelling listening to rock music, playing the piano and playing table tennis. I try to visit a different country each year and so far had been to eight of them.
I would be glad to meet you someday. I hope I would be able to become your friend and then meet you to know more about you.
Well, let me finish here. I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter. Please tell me all about yourself and your interests.
Warm wishes,
Daniel Red
Dear Adam,
My name is Alex Green, and I received your name and mailing address from a renowned magazine in Japan called
Nara
Pen Pals. I am
very
excited to have this opportunity to write to you and become pen pals. I hope you would write me back.
I
’m
currently
working as a computer programmer in a large multinational
company
in Japan.
I
graduated from
Waseda
University with a Bachelor’s degree in computer science in December 2017. While I
greatly
enjoy my
current
job, I’m interested in pursuing a Master’s degree and hope to
begin
graduate studies
next
March. My hobbies include blogging, travelling listening to rock music, playing the piano and playing table tennis. I try to visit a
different
country each year and
so
far had been
to
eight of them.
I would be glad to
meet
you someday.
I
hope I would be able to become your friend and then
meet
you to know more about you.
Well,
let
me finish here. I am already
eagerly
awaiting your reply to this
first
letter.
Please
tell
me all about yourself and your interests.
Warm wishes,
Daniel Red
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