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You have a neighbour wh is often burning rubbish at their house. Write a complaint about it to the local council and say a). What is happening b). How is your family harmed by this c). What could be the solution, in your opinion

You have a neighbour wh is often burning rubbish at their house. Write a complaint about it to the local council and say a). What is happening b). How is your family harmed by this c). What could be the solution, in your opinion awlaX
Dear Mr. Agrawal, I am a resident of Commonwealth society in Mira road east and I am writing this letter to seek your attention at one of activity that often happens in my neighbourhood and it is not only harming the eco-system of our town but also has been primarily affecting the health of the members of the society. To bring in your notice, every other day my neighbour burns some kind of rubbish at her apartment whose dark coloured smoke spreads all over society and its sharp smell makes almost everyone coughing. Since, my family lives the closest to her apartment, we have to bear most of the discomfort. Moreover, one of my family members has also got ill due to throat infection caused by the smoke. As a member of the society and one of the victim, we request you to kindly intervene in the situation. In my opinion, your team can suggest them to use the garbage disposal area located at the outskirts of the city, that way it will not affect the environment as well as society residents. I look forward to hearing from you about the course of action taken in this regards. Yours faithfully, Sweta Singh
Dear Mr.
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Agrawal
,

I am a resident of Commonwealth
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society
in Mira road
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east and
I am writing this letter to seek your attention at one of activity that
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often
happens in my
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neighbourhood
and it is not
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only
harming the
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eco-system
of our town
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but
also
has been
primarily
affecting the health of the members of the society.

To bring in your notice, every other day my
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neighbour
burns
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some
kind of rubbish at her apartment whose dark
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coloured
smoke spreads all over
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society
and its sharp smell
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makes
almost everyone
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coughing
.

Since, my family
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lives
the closest to her apartment, we
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have to
bear most of the discomfort.
Moreover
, one of my family members has
also
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got
ill due to throat infection caused by the smoke.

As a member of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
and one of the victim, we request you to kindly intervene in the situation. In my opinion, your team can suggest them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the garbage disposal area located at the outskirts of the city, that way it will not affect the environment
as well
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
residents.

I look forward to hearing from you about the course of action taken in
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this
regards.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Sweta
Singh
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IELTS letter You have a neighbour wh is often burning rubbish at their house. Write a complaint about it to the local council and say a). What is happening b). How is your family harmed by this c). What could be the solution, in your opinion

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