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A friend invited you to their wedding.  Thank your friend for the invitation Explain why you can’t go Suggest a wedding present you can give to your friend

A friend invited you to their wedding. Thank your friend for the invitation Explain why you can’t go Suggest a wedding present you can give to your friend oRkm3
Dear Mary, Congratulations on your wedding and thank you for the invitation. I received your invitation card 3 days ago and I must say that I am very happy for you. Unfortunately, I will not be in the country on that special day, as I will be traveling to China for two weeks for an important business trip. I had planned earlier a month back to embark on this journey, but due to some financial constraints after the renovation of my shop, I could not make it. I am deeply sorry and wish I can change my plans again to celebrate with you. Please try to enjoy your day, look beautiful, and take some lovely pictures. Since I will be doing a lot of shopping, I would like to make it up to you by getting you a lovely wedding present. How about the smoothie blender or waffle maker that you have been dreaming of buying? I remember how much you spoke about it the last time I visited your place. Kindly let me know which of the present you would prefer via email, Facebook, or Twitter, as I will be online every morning from 7 am to 9 am while being away. Once again have fun and do not forget to send some nice pictures to me. Yours Sincerely Julia
Dear Mary,

Congratulations on your wedding and thank you for the invitation. I received your invitation card 3 days ago and I
must
say that I am
very
happy for you. Unfortunately, I will not be in the country on that special day, as I will be traveling to China for two weeks for an
important
business trip.

I had planned earlier a month back to embark on this journey,
but
due to
some
financial constraints after the renovation of my shop, I could not
make
it. I am
deeply
sorry and wish I can
change
my plans again to celebrate with you.
Please
try to enjoy your day, look
beautiful
, and take
some
lovely pictures.

Since I will be doing
a lot of
shopping, I would like to
make
it up to you by getting you a lovely wedding present. How about the smoothie blender or waffle maker that you have been dreaming of buying? I remember how much you spoke about it the last time I visited your place.

Kindly
let
me know which of the present you would prefer via email, Facebook, or Twitter, as I will be online every morning from 7 am to 9 am while being away. Once again have fun and do not forget to
send
some
nice pictures to me.

Yours
Sincerely


Julia
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IELTS letter A friend invited you to their wedding. Thank your friend for the invitation Explain why you can’t go Suggest a wedding present you can give to your friend

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  American English
7 paragraphs
220 words
6.5
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