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You are moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say 1. when and where do you move? 2. why do you move out? 3. how do you feel about it?

You are moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say 1. when and where do you move? 2. why do you move out? 3. how do you feel about it? ljLDJ
Dear Shalini, Hope you are doing well! I'm writing this letter to tell you about our sudden plans for relocation, due to which we have decided to vacate our current accommodation. I can't explain to you, how much we enjoyed your company during all these months of our stay. Sadly, 31st of this month will be our last day here. From here, I will be flying back to Delhi at my parent's place and my husband will shift to his mom's house in Mumbai. You will be excited to know that I've got a job offer at India's biggest immigration company with a very attractive salary package and other benefits. There is just one thing which is making me upset is that the job location will be Delhi and not Mumbai, due to which I will have to relocate. But believe me, the proposal is worth considering. I can't express to you how happy I am about this chance but at the same time I'm really gonna miss you and all the fun and parties we did together. Best Wishes, Sweta Singh
Dear
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Shalini
,

Hope you are doing well! I'm writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about our sudden plans for relocation, due to which we have decided to vacate our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
accommodation. I can't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
to you, how much we enjoyed your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
during all these months of our stay.

Sadly
, 31st of this month will be our last day here. From here, I will be flying back to Delhi at my parent's place and my husband will shift to his mom's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
in Mumbai.

You will
be excited
to know that I've
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a job offer at India's biggest immigration
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
with a
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very
attractive salary package and other benefits. There is
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just
one thing which is making me upset is that the job location will be Delhi and not Mumbai, due to which I will
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have to
relocate.
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But
believe me, the proposal is worth considering.

I can't express to you how happy I am about this chance
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but
at the same time I'm
really
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gonna
miss you and all the fun and parties we did together.

Best Wishes,

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Sweta
Singh
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IELTS letter You are moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say 1. when and where do you move? 2. why do you move out? 3. how do you feel about it?

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7 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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