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Write a letter to your friend who is familiar with the city. In your letter: • Tell him or her about the occasion • Tell him or her about what kind of a restaurant you prefer • Ask him suitable recommendations Start with Dear..............,

Write a letter to your friend who is familiar with the city. In your letter: • Tell him or her about the occasion • Tell him or her about what kind of a restaurant you prefer • Ask him suitable recommendations Start with Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . , Kwla6
I hope you are doing well and I'm really excited to write to you after a while. As I told you earlier, we've moved to the new city as part of my job change. I'm enjoying the work and weather very much here but haven't started exploring the city yet. With my parent's 30th anniversary pitching in this weekend, I am planning for a surprise! It'd be good to take them to a serene place; a beautiful garden with a fountain amidst. That's because I am planning to make them exchange rings to revive their first anniversary. Doesn't it sound dreamy? They also love the Chettinad style of food varieties, but I'm not sure of any such restaurants here. I remember you sharing such places in the city, please write to me your suggestions in picking out a place or you can decide the place for me. I will make the reservation right away upon hearing from you. I know you will act immediately, you are a charmer!
I hope you are doing well and I'm
really
excited to write to you after a while. As I
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told
you earlier, we've
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moved
to the new city as part of my job
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change
. I'm enjoying the work and weather
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very
much here
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but
haven't
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started
exploring the city
yet
. With my parent's 30th anniversary pitching in this weekend, I am planning for a surprise!

It'd be
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good
to take them to a serene
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place
; a
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beautiful
garden with a fountain amidst. That's
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because
I am planning to
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make
them exchange rings to revive their
first
anniversary. Doesn't it sound dreamy?

They
also
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love
the
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Chettinad
style of food varieties,
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but
I'm not sure of any such restaurants here. I remember you sharing such
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places
in the city,
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please
write to me your suggestions in picking out a
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place
or you can decide the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
for me. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the reservation right away upon hearing from you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
know you will act immediately, you are a charmer!
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who is familiar with the city. In your letter: • Tell him or her about the occasion • Tell him or her about what kind of a restaurant you prefer • Ask him suitable recommendations Start with Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

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168 words
6.0
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