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you have a morning English course but you can not go to class because your brother is sick write a letter to your coordinator

you have a morning English course but you can not go to class because your brother is sick write a letter to your coordinator 269kk
I am writing to you with regard to the English course which will be started in 3 days on wednesday. Althuogh I have registered for the class previous week, I am not able to attend the course this wednesday. Unfortunately my brother had some flu-like symptoms yesterday and i bring him to be tested for covid-19 and he was posetive. so, his physician ordered him to be quarantine for two weeks and he advised that he needs to be looked after in these 2 weeks. furtheremore, as we are living in same room i have to be quarantined too. therefore, I should stay with him to look after and evaluate my symptoms in order to take a test for covid-19. I would appreciate it if you could register me for the course that will be started next month. if it is not possible i would be thankful if you could pay back my tuition.
I am writing to you with regard to the English course which will be
started
in 3 days on
wednesday
.
Althuogh
I have registered for the
class
previous week, I am not able to attend the course this
wednesday
. Unfortunately my brother had
some
flu-like symptoms yesterday and
i
bring him to be
tested
for
covid-19 and
he was
posetive
.
so
, his physician ordered him to be quarantine for two
weeks and
he advised that he needs to
be looked
after in these 2 weeks.
furtheremore
, as we are living in same room
i
have to
be quarantined
too.
therefore
, I should stay with him to look after and evaluate my symptoms in order to take a
test
for
covid-19
. I would appreciate it if you could register me for the course that will be
started
next
month.
if
it is not possible
i
would be thankful if you could pay back my tuition.
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IELTS letter you have a morning English course but you can not go to class because your brother is sick write a letter to your coordinator

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
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