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you are the manager IT company and want to organize an important meeting with the staff write a letter

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Firstly i wish to appreciate your hard works to rise company's services quality and as a result we have been nominated for the best customer services in the World IT Company Awards. It is an honor to be a part of this company. As progression to successes should never be stopped, a meeting is organized for the next week on Wednesday afternoon to discuss future company goals. it is obligatory for the manager of customer support team, products' quality team and selling team to take part in this meeting and further more they should prepare themselves to discuss their section's issues and suggestions. please make sure to bring your staff's ratings in order to rank them for future encouragments. the last point to be noticed is that a further meeting will be held next month to follow up next week meeting's decisions.
Firstly
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
wish to appreciate your
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hard
works to rise
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's services quality and
as a result
we have
been nominated
for the best customer services in the World IT
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Company
Awards. It is an honor to be a part of this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. As progression to successes should never be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stopped
, a meeting
is organized
for the
next
week on Wednesday afternoon to discuss future
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
goals.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
is obligatory for the manager of customer support team, products' quality team and selling team to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in this meeting and
further
more they should prepare themselves to discuss their section's issues and suggestions.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure to bring your staff's ratings in order to rank them for future
Possible spelling mistake found.
encouragments
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
last point to
be noticed
is that a
further
meeting will
be held
next
month to follow up
next
week meeting's decisions.

IELTS letter you are the manager IT company and want to organize an important meeting with the staff write a letter

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  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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