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You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting.

You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. m12mN
Dear Mr. Dutta, I am writing to let you know the agenda of our tomorrow’s meeting at 3: 00 pm in the conference room. During the meeting, we can discuss my previous year’s accomplishments, suggestions about hiring new members and skill update for me. My past year has been fruitful as I led our 50-member team to deliver the ‘Glob android app’ project to our most prestigious client ‘Sakura’ on time and with zero defects. Additionally, I was able to convince them to employ us in building another app for food delivery services. There’s a need to recruit new people as our business is growing, hence I’d like to propose an increment of 5% in our hiring budget. As the team is expanding, there is a need to manage the team efficiently, for this I need Agile methodology certification. In tomorrow’s meeting, we can explore other available training options for me. Looking forward to having a constructive discourse tomorrow. Yours sincerely, Deb
Dear Mr.
Dutta
,

I am writing to
let
you know the agenda of our tomorrow’s meeting at 3: 00 pm in the conference room. During the meeting, we can discuss my previous year’s accomplishments, suggestions about hiring new members and
skill
update for me.

My past year has been fruitful as I led our 50-member team to deliver the ‘Glob android app’ project to our most prestigious client ‘
Sakura
’ on time and with zero defects.
Additionally
, I was able to convince them to employ us in building another app for food delivery services.

There’s a need to recruit new
people
as our business is growing,
hence
I’d like to propose an increment of 5% in our hiring budget.

As the team is expanding, there is a need to manage the team
efficiently
, for this I need Agile methodology certification. In tomorrow’s meeting, we can explore other available training options for me.

Looking forward to having a constructive discourse tomorrow.

Yours
sincerely
,

Deb
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IELTS letter You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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