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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · Get contact details for when you are away. · Give instructions about how to care for your pet. · Describe other household duties

Hello Mary, Thanks a lot for always being there for me. You can reach me out on WhatsApp anytime. In case I am not available you can contact my neighbour ‘Anna’, I will share her contact details with you on WhatsApp, and I will hand over the keys to her. She is already informed about you coming over to my place during my vacations. My pet’s name is ‘Whistle’, and he is a decent Persian cat, He often plays on his own with rubber toys that are alreadykeptin his space, I can assure that he won’t bother you much. He takes three meals a day: Chicken dry snack in the morning, Fish wet snack in the afternoon and evening. All the food is stocked up in the kitchen drawer labelled as ‘Whistle's Food’. He enjoys an afternoon pleasant walk in the neighbourhood after his second meal. Regardinga number of household chores, I prefer you to do it twice per week — every Sunday and Wednesday that includes the basic to-dos like cleaning the floor, washing dishes, watering the plants and washing clothes. I hope you enjoy the stay at my place and WhatsApp me if you need something from Miami. Hope to see you in the near future once I am back home.
Hello Mary,

Thanks a lot for always being there for me. You can reach me out on WhatsApp anytime. In case I am not available you can contact my
neighbour
‘Anna’, I will share her contact
details
with you on WhatsApp, and I will hand over the keys to her. She is already informed about you coming over to my place during my vacations.

My pet’s name is ‘Whistle’, and he is a decent Persian cat, He
often
plays on his
own
with rubber toys that are
alreadykeptin
his space, I can assure that he won’t bother you much. He takes three meals a day: Chicken dry snack in the morning, Fish wet snack in the afternoon and evening. All the food
is stocked
up in the kitchen drawer labelled as ‘Whistle's Food’. He enjoys an afternoon pleasant walk in the
neighbourhood
after his second meal.

Regardinga
number of household chores, I prefer you to do it twice per week — every Sunday and Wednesday that includes the basic to-dos like cleaning the floor, washing dishes, watering the plants and washing clothes.

I hope you enjoy the stay at my place and WhatsApp me if you need something from Miami. Hope to
see
you in the near future once I am back home.
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · Get contact details for when you are away. · Give instructions about how to care for your pet. · Describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
213 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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