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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · Get contact details for when you are away. · Give instructions about how to care for your pet. · Describe other household duties

Hello Mary, Thanks a lot for always being there for me. You can reach me out on WhatsApp anytime. In case I am not available you can contact my neighbour ‘Anna’, I will share her contact details with you on WhatsApp, and I will hand over the keys to her. She is already informed about you coming over to my place during my vacations. My pet’s name is ‘Whistle’, and he is a decent Persian cat, He often plays on his own with rubber toys that are alreadykeptin his space, I can assure that he won’t bother you much. He takes three meals a day: Chicken dry snack in the morning, Fish wet snack in the afternoon and evening. All the food is stocked up in the kitchen drawer labelled as ‘Whistle's Food’. He enjoys an afternoon pleasant walk in the neighbourhood after his second meal. Regardinga number of household chores, I prefer you to do it twice per week — every Sunday and Wednesday that includes the basic to-dos like cleaning the floor, washing dishes, watering the plants and washing clothes. I hope you enjoy the stay at my place and WhatsApp me if you need something from Miami. Hope to see you in the near future once I am back home.

Hello Mary,

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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · Get contact details for when you are away. · Give instructions about how to care for your pet. · Describe other household duties

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

213 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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