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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 9Mj0
D. G. H. S. The Ministry of Health, Colombo. Through, Director, Teaching Hospital, Kandy. 23rd March 2021. Dear Sir/Madam, For overseas leave extension I am Dr Herath Bandaralage Kithsiri Kumara Bandara, working as a General Practitioner at Muqniyat Health Centre, Ibri, Oman since 09th of April 2018 and this is to kindly inform you that the Oman Ministry of Health has extended my service period further 1 year duration from 09th of April 2021, as well as to request the extention of the overseas leave duration further one year from 08th of April 2021. The service extension letter is attached here with, issued by the Health Ministry of Oman. Thanks in advance. Further details Name with Initials and the adresss: H. B. K. K. Bandara. No: -210, Digampathaha Junction, Digampathaha, Kimbissa. Emp no: 2480 Hospital worked: Teaching Hospital, Kandy. Worked Unit: Anaesthesia Consultant side: Anaeasthetist. Dr. Saman Karunathilake. Telephone no: +96892177131 Signature
D. G. H. S. The Ministry of Health,

Colombo.

Through,

Director, Teaching Hospital,

Kandy
.

23rd March 2021.

Dear Sir/Madam,

For overseas
leave
extension

I am Dr
Herath
Bandaralage
Kithsiri
Kumara
Bandara
, working as a General Practitioner at
Muqniyat
Health
Centre
,
Ibri
, Oman since 09th of April 2018 and this is to kindly inform you that the Oman Ministry of Health has extended my service period
further
1 year duration from 09th of April 2021,
as well
as to request the
extention
of the overseas
leave
duration
further
one year from 08th of April 2021.

The service extension letter
is attached
here with, issued by the Health Ministry of Oman. Thanks in advance.

Further
details


Name with Initials and the
adresss
: H. B. K. K.
Bandara
. No: -210,
Digampathaha
Junction,
Digampathaha
,
Kimbissa
.

Emp
no: 2480

Hospital worked: Teaching Hospital,
Kandy
.

Worked Unit:
Anaesthesia


Consultant side:
Anaeasthetist
. Dr.
Saman
Karunathilake
.

Telephone no: +96892177131

Signature
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IELTS letter Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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