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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I a

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e. g. Dear Mr. Smith, ) and end with “Yours sincerely, ”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e. g. I a xmD6b
Dear Mr. Shah, I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to continue with the evening batch from 8: 00 pm to 10: 00 pm that I have joined with your classes for my English improvement. The reason behind it is that I am having full time job with a Chartered Accountantancy firm, and that require my presence there from morning 10: 00 to evening 7: 00. However due to season basis work, my boss have requested me to work a bit overtime due to workload. The timing that I choose previously for English improvement course was suitable then, but now due to overtime I am unable to continue with that. This additional work requiree me to be available at office from 10: 00 am to 9: 00 pm. So, I hereby inform you about discontinuance of my class presently. Probably after being relieved from present situation at work, I would surely restart with my course as and when possible. Yours sincerely, Komal Otwani.
Dear Mr. Shah,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to continue with the evening batch from 8: 00 pm to 10: 00 pm that I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
with your classes for my English improvement.

The reason behind it is that I am having full time job with a Chartered
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Accountantancy
firm, and that require my presence there from morning 10: 00 to evening 7: 00.

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However
due to season basis
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, my boss have requested me to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
a bit overtime due to workload.

The timing that I choose previously for English improvement course was suitable then,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
due to overtime I am unable to continue with that. This additional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
Possible spelling mistake found.
requiree
me to be available at office from 10: 00 am to 9: 00 pm.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I hereby inform you about discontinuance of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
presently
.

Probably
after
being relieved
from present situation at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
, I would
surely
restart with my course as and when possible.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Komal
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Otwani
.
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e. g. Dear Mr. Smith, ) and end with “Yours sincerely, ”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e. g. I a

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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I a