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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I a

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e. g. Dear Mr. Smith, ) and end with “Yours sincerely, ”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e. g. I a Aj3KN

Dear Mrs Das, I am Nikhil Otwani, a student in the evening batch of Programming class in the academy with seat No 123456 for last 2 months since Jan 2021. I am writing this letter to bring to your attention that I would be not be able to continue for this class for the further sessions due to lack of time availibility; being working full time as assistant manager in XYZ Bank. I had joined the program with a view to enrich my professional capabilities with programming skills so as to benefit in the long run for my carrer. With the job timings, being 9 hours till 7 pm on daily basis, I had enrolled for the programming class of 7. 30 to 8. 30 pm batch. However due to heavy work load, there is stretch in working hours lately and I am not able to attend to the class. Thus, I would request you to cancel my registeration from this batch and request your goodself to maintain a credit of fees paid against my name, as I would want to continue this class after few days with flexible hours and change in timings to morning batches which i feel would be possible to attend with change in daily schedule and start of my day early morning, attending class and later join office for working hours. Hope you would understand my situation and request for cancellation of registeration at the existing class. Would await a positive reply from your end. Thanking You, XYZ

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Das
,

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, a student in the evening batch of Programming This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 in the academy with seat No 123456 for last 2 months since Jan 2021.

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be
 able to continue for this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 for the further
 sessions due to lack of time Possible spelling mistake found.availability
availibility
; being working full time as assistant manager in XYZ Bank.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 the program with a view to enrich my professional capabilities with programming This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
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carrer
. With the job timings, being 9 hours till 7 pm on daily basis, I had enrolled for the programming This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 of 7. 30 to 8. 30 pm batch.

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However
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lately and
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class
.

Thus
, I would request you to cancel my Possible spelling mistake found.registration
registeration
 from this batch and request your Possible spelling mistake found.good selfgoods elf
goodself
 to maintain a credit of fees paid against my name, as I would want to continue this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 after few days with flexible hours and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in timings to morning batches which Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 feel would be possible to attend with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in daily schedule and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 of my day early morning, attending This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 and later This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 office for working hours.

Hope you would understand my situation and request for cancellation of Possible spelling mistake found.registration
registeration
 at the existing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. Would await a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

Thanking You,

XYZ