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Dear Rohit, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing this letter to let you know I have some furniture to sell because next month I will move to another city regarding my new job. And I find a new apartment to live. But it is not that much huge where I can set my all furniture. So, I decided some of the furniture I will sell. I thought you might be interested to buy some of things. It includes Chairs, bed, and table. All furniture is in very good condition. I bought my whole furniture in last year when I moved here. All furniture made by maple wood. So, if you are interesrted please let me know and you can come any time to observe all the things. And you can buy those things which you want and don’t worry about the price. It will be reasonable. Best wishes Guri
Dear Rohit,

I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing this letter to
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to another city regarding my new job. And I find a new apartment to
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it is not that much huge where I can set my all
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furniture
.
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, I decided
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some of the
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I will sell.

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you might
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some of things
. It includes Chairs, bed, and table. All
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furniture
is in
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good
condition. I
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my whole
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furniture
in last year when I
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here. All
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furniture
made by maple wood.

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, if you are
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interesrted
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me know and you can
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any time to observe all the things. And you can
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buy
those things which you want and don’t worry about the price. It will be reasonable.

Best wishes

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Guri

IELTS letter write a letter your friend to sell furnitur

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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