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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take xl99
Dear Sir, I am your student of course no# 112 - Human Resources. I am doing a full-time job and I cannot continue my course right now due to the fact I cannot manage my time. Further explaining, I cannot continue the course as I am working in a multinational firm and I got a task and it's really important to for me to complete this task before the deadline as I will be promoted by this task in the middle of this year. I am really eager to learn about this course due to the fact it is related to my task and my work. I want to further explain that please allow me to take this course in winters, as I cannot manage my time at this time. I hope you understand my situation and grant me break for this course to continue it later. Yours faithfully Javaria
Dear Sir,

I am your student of
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course
no# 112
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Human Resources. I am doing a full-time job and I cannot continue my
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course
right
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now
due to the fact I cannot manage my time.

Further
explaining, I cannot continue the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
as I am working in a multinational firm and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a
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task
and it's
really
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important
to for me to complete this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the deadline as I will
be promoted
by this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
in the middle of this year. I am
really
eager to learn about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
due to the fact it
is related
to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
and my work.

I want to
further
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explain
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to take this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in winters, as I cannot manage my time at this time.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you understand my situation and grant me break for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
to continue it later.

Yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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5 paragraphs
149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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