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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take kP0e

Dear Mr. max, I am Rahul from your evening classes. I started this course so that i can study more about investments and help my self and other financially. As you know I am working as team leas in my logistics company and recently i got promotion. After promotion there are more responsibilities on me as now I need to take care for not one team. I understand from the administrator department my fee can't be refunded but would like to take this course after 6 month once i am comfortable with new responsibilities at my work and everything get streamline. Hope you understand my issue. Your Sincerely Rahul

Dear Mr. max,

I am Rahul from your evening classes. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 this course This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can study more about investments and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 my self and other financially
.

As you know I am working as team leas in my logistics This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and recently Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 promotion. After promotion there are more responsibilities on me as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I need to take care for not one team.

I understand from the administrator department my fee can't be refunded
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 would like to take this course after 6 Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
 once Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am comfortable with new responsibilities at my work and everything This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 streamline. Hope you understand my issue.

Your Sincerely


Rahul

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

108 words

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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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