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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take kP0e
Dear Mr. max, I am Rahul from your evening classes. I started this course so that i can study more about investments and help my self and other financially. As you know I am working as team leas in my logistics company and recently i got promotion. After promotion there are more responsibilities on me as now I need to take care for not one team. I understand from the administrator department my fee can't be refunded but would like to take this course after 6 month once i am comfortable with new responsibilities at my work and everything get streamline. Hope you understand my issue. Your Sincerely Rahul
Dear Mr. max,

I am Rahul from your evening classes. I
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can study more about investments and
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company
and recently
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i
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got
promotion. After promotion there are more responsibilities on me as
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now
I need to take care for not one team.

I understand from the administrator department my fee can't
be refunded
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but
would like to take this course after 6
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month
once
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am comfortable with new responsibilities at my work and everything
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get
streamline. Hope you understand my issue.

Your
Sincerely


Rahul
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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  American English
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108 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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