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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit himher country. you have never been there before and need some informa

Dear Smith, I am very grateful that you reached out to me after a year. I hope this finds you radiant health and the best spirit of your family. I am very merci because you invited me and my family to your home for the vacation. I am planning to come to the US next month. As you know that Diwali is on the way so I took some leaves from my work. We have been a very long time seeing each. Though I will come to your home the first time, I would like to buy some sweets and presents for your family. Can you please advise me about their likes and hobbies? Moreover, I make a list of some sight scenes and adventure parks. Could you please revise it and according to your experience choose the best one. I also think about going camping with the family and will play cricket, badminton, boating, and barbeque and so on. I want to eat the Dosa of your mother's hand as you are appreciating a lot about that. You know that I am fond of food so I can not wait to taste your local food. Can you mention the weather there so we could bring clothes according to the weather? Furthermore, I know you will come to pick up us at the airport. But, Text me your home address and home telephone number for safety reasons. I will send you my ticket so you can manage your time according to departure time. I could not wait longer to see you after a year. yours lovingly, Mili
Dear Smith,

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grateful that you reached out to me after a year. I hope this finds you radiant health and the best spirit of your
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am
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merci
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you invited me and my
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to your home for the vacation.

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am planning to
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to the US
next
month. As you know that Diwali is on the way
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I took
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some
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from my work. We have been a
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long
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seeing each. Though I will
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to your home the
first
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time
, I would like to
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buy
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some
sweets and presents for your
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family
. Can you
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please
advise me about their likes and hobbies?
Moreover
, I
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make
a list of
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some
sight scenes and adventure parks. Could you
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please
revise it and according to your experience choose the best one. I
also
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think
about going camping with the
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family
and will play cricket, badminton, boating, and
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barbeque
and
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on. I want to eat the
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Dosa
of your mother's hand as you are appreciating a lot about that. You know that I am fond of food
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so
I can not wait to taste your local food. Can you mention the weather there
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so
we could bring clothes according to the weather?

Furthermore
, I know you will
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come
to pick up us at the airport.
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But
, Text me your home address and home telephone number for safety reasons. I will
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send
you my ticket
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so
you can manage your
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time
according to departure
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. I could not wait longer to
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see
you after a year.

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yours
lovingly
,

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Mili
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IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit himher country. you have never been there before and need some informa

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