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You are going to visit New Zealand for an 'English and Homestay' program. You have just received details of your homestay host family. Write your first letter to the family. In your letter, Content Top • introduce yourself • ask the family some questions to get information that is important to you • tell the family about your arrival date and time. Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mark and Samantha, Hopefully, you are doing great. I was very thrilled to read some information about your family. Likewise, I found it very exciting that you live in a small community by the ocean. Unlike you, I grew up in a very big Russian city. I always enjoy the time when I can get away from the city rush. Therefore, most of my summer holidays I spend in a small town. I have some questions in regards to the weather conditions throughout the year. If you could tell me what I should take for each season, it will be very helpful. Also, would you recommend taking some horseback ridding classes prior to my arrival, since you enjoy it every morning? I will arrive on July 15 th at 5 pm, which is three weeks from now. I hope my flight will not be delayed. I can’t wait for my adventure in New Zealand. Likewise, I am sure we will have the most enjoyable time together. Talk to you soon! yours truly, Alina
Dear Mark and Samantha,

Hopefully
, you are doing great. I was
very
thrilled to read
some


information about your family.
Likewise
, I found it
very
exciting that

you
live
in a
small
community by the ocean.

Unlike you, I grew up in a
very
big
Russian city. I always enjoy

the time when I can
get
away from the city rush.
Therefore
, most of my

summer holidays I spend in a
small
town.

I have
some
questions
in regards to
the weather conditions

throughout the year. If you could
tell
me what I should take for each

season, it will be
very
helpful.
Also
, would you recommend taking
some


horseback ridding classes prior to my arrival, since you enjoy it every

morning?

I will arrive on July
15 th
at 5 pm, which is three weeks from
now
. I

hope my flight will not
be delayed
.

I
can’t wait for my adventure in New Zealand.
Likewise
, I am sure

we will have the most enjoyable time together. Talk to you
soon
!

yours
truly
, Alina
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IELTS letter You are going to visit New Zealand for an ' English and Homestay' program. You have just received details of your homestay host family. Write your first letter to the family. In your letter, Content Top • introduce yourself • ask the family some questions to get information that is important to you • tell the family about your arrival date and time.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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