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An australian friend is coming to visit, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say how you feel about the visit. suggest what you could do on his/her birthday. Try to find out what your friend thinks about your idea

Dear Jhon, Hope this letter finds you well! I felt really happy when you informed me about your plan to visit me on next Friday. I am very excited to meet you as it has been more than an year since we met last time. I have so many things to share with you related to my work and my personal plans. I felt more happy when I checked the date that falls on next Friday. It is your birthday on thay day and we will have a great chance to celebrate it togather. Do you remember the shopping mall near to my home where we used to go for shopping? A new bakery shop is recently oeped there and it serves delicious cupcakes. You would love to have the chocolate cupcakes over there. I also have a surprise gift for you. I am sure you will be amzed by having that gift and it will be useful to you in doing daily life. Yours lovingly, Hena
Dear
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Jhon
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Hope this letter finds you well!

I felt
really
happy when you informed me about your plan to visit me on
next
Friday. I am
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very
excited to
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meet
you as it has been more than
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an
year since we met last time.
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I
have
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so
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many
things to share with you related to my work and my personal plans.

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I
felt more happy when I
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checked
the date that falls on
next
Friday. It is your birthday on
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thay
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day and
we will have a great chance to celebrate it
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togather
. Do you remember the shopping mall near to my home where we
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used
to go for shopping? A new bakery shop is recently
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oeped
there and it serves delicious cupcakes. You would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to have the chocolate cupcakes over there.

I
also
have a surprise gift for you. I am sure you will be
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amzed
by having that gift and it will be useful to you in doing daily life.

Yours
lovingly
,

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Hena
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IELTS letter An australian friend is coming to visit, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say how you feel about the visit. suggest what you could do on his/her birthday. Try to find out what your friend thinks about your idea

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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