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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take MnEk
Dear Teacher; I'm your loyal student Nguyen Anh Kiet, now write to you this letter to explain to you a thing. The situation is that I can not continue the evening course any more. Because of my full time job as a recepter for a Mc Donnal, I have already take role in my job for at least 5 weeks now and following those days I found that some times the evening course have block each other in a really worst situation, like a time because of taking a part time course I have went late for my job and the cause of that have make me losed 15 cent that day. Or during last weekend, cause by a annoying geust that got drunk and began to make hard day for us and follow that I have miss the course. I really like my job as a recepter for Mc Donnal because of the loan of course but I'm also don't want to get in your bad side so I hope this letter will explain the reason why I stop the coure. I really really sorry to you. I wish when you read this letter you will found a way to may be tranfer me to a may be a weekend work or somethings. Thank You! Your Student Kiet
Dear Teacher;

I'm your loyal student Nguyen
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Anh
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Kiet
,
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now
write to you this letter to
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explain
to you a thing. The situation is that I can not continue the evening
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course
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any more
.
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Because
of my full
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time
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job
as a
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recepter
for a
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Mc
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Donnal
, I have already
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take
role in my
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job
for at least 5 weeks
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now
and following those days I found that
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some
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times
the evening
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course
have
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block
each other in a
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really worst
situation, like a
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time
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because
of taking a part
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time
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course
I have
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went
late for my
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job
and the cause of that have
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make
me
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losed
15
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cent
that day. Or during last weekend, cause by
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a
annoying
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geust
that
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got
drunk and began to
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make
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hard
day for us and follow that I have miss the
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course
. I
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really
like my
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job
as a
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recepter
for
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Mc
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Donnal
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because
of the loan of
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course
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but
I'm
also
don't want to
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get
in your
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bad
side
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so
I hope this letter will
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explain
the reason why I
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stop
the
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coure
. I
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really
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really
sorry to you.
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I
wish when you read this letter you will
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found
a way to may be
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tranfer
me to a may be a weekend work or somethings. Thank You!

Your Student

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Kiet

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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  American English
4 paragraphs
218 words
5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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