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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. Write a letter to the course tutor

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. Write a letter to the course tutor yX38l
Dear sir, I'm writing concerning the position of my CEFR course that I am due to begin next month. However, a problem has arisen. As you know, I currently work in a full time job and you will remember from my interview that I have also a part time evening course. Unfortunately, my students will be waiting for having my online lesson. I realize this will be inconvenient to you, but very much hope that, given circumstances, you would be prepared to allow me to take up my position with you two weeks later than planned. I would like to emphasize that I remain very keen to take part in your lessons, and that I will be gaining further useful experience during this time. I look forward to hearing from you.
Dear sir, I'm writing concerning the position of my CEFR course that I am due to
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begin
next
month.
However
, a problem has arisen. As you know, I
currently
work in a full time job and you will remember from my interview that I have
also
a
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part time
evening course. Unfortunately, my students will be waiting for having my online lesson. I realize this will be inconvenient to you,
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but
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very
much hope that,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
circumstances, you would
be prepared
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to take up my position with you two weeks later than planned. I would like to emphasize that I remain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
keen to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in your lessons, and that I will be gaining
further
useful experience during this time.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. Write a letter to the course tutor

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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