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Participate in a memory course

Participate in a memory course Nr5Mm
Dear sir or Madam, I would like to take part in your memory course. When I was younger I think I used to have a very good memory. I used to be able to memorize long lists of dates without any trouble. But I find it harder and harder to remember things these days, so now I would say my memory is poor. For example, most of the time I know I should do something, but my mind went completely blank. So I have to write myself little notes as a reminder. I really miss those days that didn’t worry about forgetting things. I think participating in this course would help me and put my mind to ease. Do you mind if I ask you about the methods used on the course and dates as well? Thank you in advance. Parmis Alizadeh
Dear sir or Madam,

I would like to
take part
in your memory course.
When
I was younger I
think
I
used
to have a
very
good
memory. I
used
to be able to memorize long lists of dates without any trouble.
But
I find it harder and harder to remember things these days,
so
now
I would say my memory is poor.
For example
, most of the time I know I should do something,
but
my mind went completely blank.
So
I
have to
write myself
little
notes as a reminder. I
really
miss those days that didn’t worry about forgetting things. I
think
participating in this course would
help
me and put my mind to
ease
.

Do you mind if I ask you about the methods
used
on the course and dates
as well
?

Thank you in advance.

Parmis
Alizadeh
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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