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Participate in a memory course

Participate in a memory course Nr5Mm

Dear sir or Madam, I would like to take part in your memory course. When I was younger I think I used to have a very good memory. I used to be able to memorize long lists of dates without any trouble. But I find it harder and harder to remember things these days, so now I would say my memory is poor. For example, most of the time I know I should do something, but my mind went completely blank. So I have to write myself little notes as a reminder. I really miss those days that didn’t worry about forgetting things. I think participating in this course would help me and put my mind to ease. Do you mind if I ask you about the methods used on the course and dates as well? Thank you in advance. Parmis Alizadeh

Dear sir or Madam,

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in your memory course. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I was younger I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 memory. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be able to memorize long lists of dates without any trouble. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I find it harder and harder to remember things these days, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I would say my memory is poor. For example
, most of the time I know I should do something, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my mind went completely blank. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 write myself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 notes as a reminder. I really
 miss those days that didn’t worry about forgetting things. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 participating in this course would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me and put my mind to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
.

Do you mind if I ask you about the methods This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 on the course and dates as well
?

Thank you in advance.

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Alizadeh