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Write a letter to your landlord. You have rented a new flat. Recently due to bad weather it got damage. Explain the damage caused. 2. How is it affecting you. 3. What you would like him to do

Write a letter to your landlord. You have rented a new flat. Recently due to bad weather it got damage. Explain the damage caused. 2. How is it affecting you. 3. What you would like him to do 2b8Yx
Dear Mr. Brown, My name is Sarah. I am one of the new tenants residing in your basement. I am writing to complain you about the nuisance faced by me as a consequence of heavy rainfall and strong wind in the recent times. As a result of detrimental weather conditions, the window of my bedroom has broken. In addition, water was filled inside my room which ruined the paintings on the wall. Although, I was managing the situation my covering the window with a curtain, but it also got drenched with rain water the other day. Furthermore, my room gets cool by the wind which caused me fever. It will be great if you fix the new window with blinds in order to eliminate the menace tackled by me or, otherwise, I will be left with no choice of complaining the relevant authorities. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours truly, Sarah
Dear Mr. Brown,

My name is Sarah. I am one of the new tenants residing in your basement. I am writing to complain you about the nuisance faced by me as a consequence of heavy rainfall and strong wind in the recent times.

As a result
of detrimental weather conditions, the window of my bedroom has broken.
In addition
, water
was filled
inside my room which ruined the paintings on the wall.

Although, I was managing the situation my covering the window with a curtain,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
drenched with rain water the other day.
Furthermore
, my room
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
cool by the wind which caused me fever.

It will be great if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
the new window with blinds in order to eliminate the menace tackled by me or,
otherwise
, I will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
with no choice of complaining the relevant authorities. I hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
truly
,

Sarah
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord. You have rented a new flat. Recently due to bad weather it got damage. Explain the damage caused. 2. How is it affecting you. 3. What you would like him to do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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