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in my informal letter.........

in my informal letter. . . . . . . . . pRggD
Dear Sam. How are you? I do hope this letter will find you in good health and spirits. I’m really glad read about your letter which about computers. Now days social media and IT are changing our life. So far I have bought a new laptop. NET is change my life forward to good and bad. Good method is I can use download many essential information. Bad way is internet lead to my health and behavior. On the contrary, I use from computer for the best method such learning English from video lessons or load numerous books for less money. I kept my money from this motion. I another thing, I wanted to mention I you buy a new phone, you will buy a new glass. Due to the fact computer are shining poison rays like x-ray. On the other hand, in our modernized ere where new technologies are done for people need, social media are important part of our life. Just give me a call if you have any questions left. Bye for now Medina.
Dear Sam.

How are you? I do hope this letter will find you in
good
health and spirits. I’m
really
glad read about your letter which about computers.
Now
days social media and IT are changing our life.
So
far I have
bought
a
new
laptop. NET is
change
my life forward to
good
and
bad
.
Good
method is I can
use
download
many essential information
.
Bad
way is internet lead to my health and behavior.
On the contrary
, I
use
from computer for the best method such learning English from video lessons or load numerous books for less money. I
kept
my money from this motion.
I
another thing, I wanted to mention I you
buy
a
new
phone, you will
buy
a
new
glass. Due to the fact computer are shining poison rays like x-ray.
On the other hand
, in our modernized ere where
new
technologies
are done
for
people
need, social media are
important
part of our life.
Just
give me a call if you have any questions
left
.

Bye for
now
Medina.
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IELTS letter in my informal letter. . . . . . . . .

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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