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Postpone project due to Covid-19

Postpone project due to Covid-19 Nr5yd
Dear Sir/ MadamI am very glad that all equipments from our new project about teaching in nature has been ready. Additionally, the area for these activity were well prepared equiped with some ornament which I beleive will attract todler to join it. However, a number of our staff can't fly to the site this week end due to lock down in his/ her home town causes imposible for us to prepare the opening ceremony. According the anoucement from government, the activity will turn to normal in a couple of weeks and for those reason we might need to reschedule the grand opening and kee on eye to the current cituation. Those all the information that i can infom to you as consideration, Sicrerely, Ida Bagus Made Artadana
Dear Sir/
MadamI
am
very
glad that all equipments from our new project about teaching in nature has been ready.
Additionally
, the area for
these activity
were
well prepared
equiped
with
some
ornament which I
beleive
will attract
todler
to
join
it.
However
, a number of our staff can't
fly
to the site this week
end
due to lock down in his/ her home town causes
imposible
for us to prepare the opening ceremony.
According the
anoucement
from
government
, the activity will turn to normal in a couple of weeks and for those reason we might need to reschedule the grand opening and
kee
on eye to the
current
cituation
. Those all the information that
i
can
infom
to you as consideration,

Sicrerely
,

Ida
Bagus
Made
Artadana
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IELTS letter Postpone project due to Covid-19

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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