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Write a letter to your course in charge and inform that you can't continue the program.

Write a letter to your course in charge and inform that you can't continue the program. oRgRD
Dear Mr Smith, My Name is jack sparrow Roll number 297861. I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to continue my MBA classes for the rest of the evening sessions. I work as a project manager for the last 3 years full time. Since most of my evenings were free, So I decided to join the part-time course. Let me explain my situation sir, last month I was asked to complete few projects before the end of this year, As the deadlines are near I need to be more focused and work more hours in the office till the evening, because of this I am neither able to fulfil my project timelines nor attending my education classes. Hence, I decided to continue my course next year. I just need a favour from your side. Can you please transfer my credit hours to next year fall semester? After completion of my pending projects, I will be able to continue my program with full engagement. Thank you for your kind help. Yours sincerely, Jack sparrow
Dear Mr Smith,

My Name is jack sparrow Roll number 297861. I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to continue my MBA classes for the rest of the evening sessions. I work as a
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project
manager for the last 3 years full time. Since most of my evenings were free,
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So
I decided to
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join
the part-time course.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation sir, last month I
was asked
to complete few
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projects
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before
the
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end
of this year, As the deadlines are near I need to be more focused and work more hours in the office till the evening,
because of this
I am neither able to fulfil my
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project
timelines nor attending my education classes.
Hence
, I decided to continue my course
next
year.

I
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just
need a
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favour
from your side. Can you
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please
transfer my credit hours to
next
year fall semester? After completion of my pending
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
projects
, I will be able to continue my program with full engagement.

Thank you for your kind
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help
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Jack sparrow
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your course in charge and inform that you can't continue the program.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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