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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have apad

Dear sir, I am John Smith living in Brampton city and working as a quality engineer in a well reputed industry. I am writing this to ask some information regarding part-time job. I have completed my Bachelor of Engineering in Mechanical branch in the year 2016 from University of Windsor. Currently I am working in one of the firm related to my profession with designated position. My English language ability of CLB 8 that is I am fluent in this language. As I am free after my office hours, I am looking for any part time work which is not related to technical branch. Any job related to language trainer, I am comfortable with this after my office duty that is after 5 p. m. It would be grate if you could help me to search this kind of job as I know you have many contacts among the market for the employment. As mentioned I have clear language test with overall band 8 and good command over the language. Moreover, I have been in this field since last two years. Thus, I am experienced also and know how to guide the beginners for this proficiency test. My speaking skill is much better than the native speaker as my vocabulary is very good. In anticipation for the positive response from you. Yours Sincerely, John Smith.

Dear sir,

I am John Smith living in Brampton city and working as a quality engineer in a well reputed industry. I am writing this to ask This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information regarding part-time job.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have completed my Bachelor of Engineering in Mechanical branch in the year 2016 from University of Windsor. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Currently,
Currently
 I am working in one of the firm related to my profession with designated position. My English You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 ability of CLB 8 Did you mean "that"?that
that is
 I am fluent in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
. As I am free after my office hours, I am looking for any This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 work which is not related to technical branch. Any job related to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 trainer, I am comfortable with this after my office duty that is
 after 5 p. m. It would be Consider using a past participle here: "grated".grated
grate
 if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to search this kind of job as I know you have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 contacts among the market for the employment.

As mentioned I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 with overall
 band 8 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 command over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
. Moreover
, I have been in this field since last two years. Thus
, I am experienced
also
 and know how to guide the beginners for this proficiency This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
. My speaking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 is much better than the native speaker as my vocabulary is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
.

In anticipation for the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from you.

Yours Sincerely
,

John Smith. 